I want to make a narrative story where the user will click in the scenes to continue engaging with the story.
Storyline [First Draft]
1. At user perspective, the story starts with a dog caught and brutally put in the truck. The dog was sent away to the dog adoption centre.
2. User view the truck driving into the place with lots of dogs barking and wounded. Some mens were beating the dogs.
3. Saw a buyer came, want to get a fierce dog to guard house, few dogs were given to choose.
4. the owner brings the dog back home, putting it outside and treat it badly, beat and scold it. The dog looks scared having its tail tucked between its leg.
5. Whenever anybody goes near the dog its scared and to protect itself it barks fiercely to stop them from going near.
6.Owner is satisfied but still beat it making it fear and will not disobey him.
7.The dog not treated in good condition, put under hot sun all day.
8. Neighbour saw and call for help, telling owner this is abuse.
9. Owner does not care, and continue doing so, dog dies.
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As I develop this story, I noticed that this is not engaging enough and the storyline is not really good. It only tells that the dog is abused but this only informs the user, not making them taking action about this matter. The story itself is also not interesting enough and jumpy. Will further develop it and more research about pet abuse to polish the story.
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